Wonder Woman 1918

This is a fantastic edit. I like the original film a lot, but TinyBreadMouse nailed the little bits that could use rework. I had to go to the edit list to remind myself of what was done, I could not detect any edits at all while watching.

The biggest improvements are tightening up the intro exposition and the interminable final battle with Ares. The are the parts that really dragged for me in the original and now they move along at a good pace without shortchanging the story. Cutting the cliche or cheesy quips through the movie helps elevate it also.

I just wish the audio were in 5.1 and not stereo, but that didn't reduce enjoyment of this great edit.

I first watched this movie a few months ago and enjoyed it but it did drag on a bit towards the end, so the scenes removed helped speed up the pace and all the audio and video edits are perfectly executed and wouldn't be noticeable to a first time viewer. This is my go to version due to being shorter then the original which makes it more enjoyable because of it.

Great work! All the technical aspects were done very well! No audio or visual issues at all! And all the small scripting edits you made were top notch, made for a much more serious watch.

For me personally, it was a bit extreme on some of the major scene removals that ended up costing a bit of the overall world-building in Themyscira, and some of the mystery in Diana's journey resulting in a less dynamic character arc for Diana. But fanedits are about executing a personal vision, and you can't please everyone LOL

Overall great, high quality work and I am excited to see what is next from this editor!

Absolutely blown away by this new edit of the movie.

Well done!

I absolutely loved the updated narrative, enjoyed the improved pacing, and did not miss the trimmed bits.
This edit trims away awkward and redundant scenes seamlessly (except for one tiny transition at 11:11), and treats its characters even better than the theatrical cut. I especially appreciated the way Steve and Diana's relationship is handled in this edit - the TC contained a few cringe-worthy moments which are blissfully gone now.

While the pacing is greatly improved, a few additional minor changes can improve the final act even further. I elaborated on those in the forum discussion.

All in all, this is a terrific edit, well done!