Mr White

To summarize: i loved the narrative you put together. The story flowed well. Great thoughts.

Here and there i would’ve insert some more scenes e.g. the planning for the break in to get the methylene and the first observation of the compound. Walter son is a sidekick, thats unfortunate, the connection between these two isn’t existent in this cut. Especially the moment where he stands up for him in the store. This would have also worked great as a stepping stone for his growing self-confidence since he started cooking meth and ultimately walking into the house of tuco salamanca and gets his money.
- the custom break in scene with the music from a later season didn’t work for me.
- Absolutely loved the ending music from radiohead. Perfect fit!

Minor thing: as mentioned the credits that got displayed when walter visited in his RV after getting his money back from tuco. That took me really out of it.

Audiowise: as mentioned before, the music is often louder than the dialog. i had to adjust the volume several times on my speaker system.

As an editor who has only made TV-to-Film edits, I understand the effort and gravity it took in order to accomplish this. This is nearly perfect summary of Season 1 with a single exception; the ending. While the editing accomplishes to transition to credits seamlessly, the narrative feels incomplete as an independent piece. With only 15-30 mins, the season could likely be completed. I personally wouldn't be opposed to the film running at 150 mins. I am aware that a sequel is in the works, so this critique may not be valid later on.

Audio-wise, the entire film transitions seamlessly from scene to scene. It's been nearly a year since I last watched through the original season, but it looks like there is new music inserted. None of this music feels out of place and blends perfectly into each scene.

In the visual department, the opening is much more visually appealing than the original show's repetitive and lackluster VFX. However, there are some The film appears to be converted to widescreen by setting the timeline to a smaller height, each shot adjusted one by one. I am very familiar with the process and how errors can pop up during this process. Sometimes, a shot can be cut too early, or too late, causing the shot to appear to jump. I've spotted this error occurring around 17:48 and at 19:25. In two cases, the opening credits still appear at 1:02:37 and 1:46:16. This could be a limitation of the editor's capabilities, though it is an easy fix and I'd be more than willing to contribute the edited shots if there were a planned re-release.

Overall, this is a fantastic fanedit, and a wonderful way to rewatch Breaking Bad Season 1 and I'm looking forward to the sequel!

Mr White takes an already amazing show and strips back subplots in favour of a more focused Walt/Jesse narrative. It'sOnRandom has perfectly edited the series down to just under 2hours, so it keeps in line with most modern movies and technically speaking, there were no jarring cuts/weird audio spikes or anything. The only thing you'll notice (2 times at most), is some of the credits can be seen sticking out above the black bars, other than that, it was flawless. Pacing wise, this edit feels "just right", it's not too fast but it's not too slow either. The movie kept me entertained throughout and was a nice way to rewatch the show and for anyone who hasn't seen the show, this could be a great way to introduce it to them. Why? Well for starters, the edit focuses on everyones favourite aspect, Walt and Jesse cooking meth! and secondly the subplots and scenes that were cut are not even noticeable while watching this edit, and that's coming from someone who's seen the show. So for anyone who hasn't... Nothing will feel out of place and, if It'sOnRandom continues with the rest of the series in a similar fashion, you won't even feel left out.

Masterfully edited to keep the focus on the two main characters with no jarring cuts.

This is, without a doubt, the best fanedit I've seen yet.

This was great! I do recall a couple side-plot incidents not included here, but the edit provides a fully cohesive story, no story element seemed to come blindly out of nowhere, and I find this an excellent way to review the main story of the first season of Breaking Bad in a time-saving fashion. Recommended!