Infinite Spider-Man

I really enjoyed the first part of this edit, removing the villains POV worked really well and keeping the focus on Peter was edited really well, but then it fell apart.
It ended with the Stark proposal and then jumped straight to stark out for a jog which was quite jarring, then there’s the exposition dump of Thanos which isn’t Peter focused and I thought could have been dumped.
Then there’s a few bits of dialogue where they mention other characters such as Thor who aren’t here and it’s noticeable that somethings missing.
But the worst part is that the edit ends with Peter getting snapped and that’s it. I think it would be better to have more resolution otherwise I watching Infinity War becomes a necessity.