Young Frankenstein [raymix]

PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the fanedit.org logo.
-added my fanedit production logo.
TITLE CARD-
-new edit of the opening suite.
-new "A Mel Brooks Film" credit.
-used text-less footage of the castle background.
-added a slow pan toward the castle.
-new title card.
-removed the opening credits.
-cross-fade from the castle to the window.
RETRIEVING THE WILL-
-slight slo-mo on the shot panning towards the window.
-longer cross-fade from the window to the clock.
CLASS QUESTIONS-
-cut the elementary explanation of the brain.
-cut "before we proceed" from "Any questions before we proceed?"
-extended the shot after the pronunciation is corrected to "Fronk-en-steen."
-cut grandpa being called "Victor." (here, he's Henry from FRANKENSTEIN.)
-cut the elementary lecture on the nervous system.
-cut the demonstration of the nervous system.
-cut the students cheering after Frederick dismisses class.
-shuffled some shots of students getting up to leave.
RECEIVING THE WILL-
-cut "great" from Gerhardt's "your great grandfather."
-cut "Bofort" from Gerhardt's "Baron Bofort Von Frankenstein."
-Gerhardt's "Baron Von Frankenstein" is heard over a shot of Frederick.
THE TRAIN TO TRANSYLVANIA-
-cut the bit with the shoe shine boy.
AT THE HOUSE OF FRANKENSTEIN-
-re-created the horizontal wipe from the staircase to the painting.
-replaced the painting with the one of Henry from SON OF FRANKENSTEIN.
-cut Frau Blucher calling Henry "Victor."
-cut Frau Blucher kissing the painting of Henry.
-shorter beat between Frederick's "I see" & "Well..."
-cut Frau Blucher calling Henry "Victor."
-cut Frau Blucher saying "Goodnight" a 2nd time.
-added Frederick's "Frau Blucher" from his 3rd "Goodnight" to his 2nd.
-the horses whinny is heard over a different shot.
-the sound of the door closing is heard over a different shot.
DREAMING OF DESTINY-
-replaced the painting with the one of Henry from SON OF FRANKENSTEIN.
-cut Frederick repeating "Ok, I'll say it."
MYSTERIOUS MUSIC-
-cut Frederick sticking his tongue out while he thinks.
-cut Frederick saying "Hand me that robe, will you dear?"
SECRET PASSAGEWAYS-
-shortened a shot of Frederick & Inga stopping to observe a decomposing head.
DISCOVERING THE OLD LAB-
-added dialog from the original FRANKENSTEIN as the group look over the lab.
--added reverb & effects to make the dialog seem distant & otherworldly.
-added the Main Theme as Frederick realizes he's in the private library.
-added a pan across the table to the How I Did It book.
-cropped the shot of the book to remove "Victor" Frankenstein as the author.
-extended the shot of the book.
-rearranged some shots of the lightning for clarity.
-extended the sound of thunder after the fade-out.
-longer transition into the next scene.
READING & REALIZING-
-cut Frederick's heavy breathing before we hear him reading.
-slower fade-in to begin the scene.
-replaced the painting with the one of Henry from SON OF FRANKENSTEIN.
-added lightning flashes to the painting shot.
-shot pushes in toward the painting.
-longer transition into the next scene.
AT BREAKFAST-
-cut Igor revealing the picture he's drawn of the Monster.
-cross-fade into the next scene.
AT THE CEMETERY-
-cut the hanged man.
-cross-fade to the body being buried.
TRANSPORTING THE BODY-
-longer transition into the next scene.
IN THE LAB-
-cut Frederick repeating "Do you understand" before Igor appears at his side.
-smoothed a skip in the audio after Frederick calls up to Igor.
CITY COUNCIL MEETING-
-cut the councilman saying "...from 5 times before."
-moved a shot of the citizens to earlier.
INTERROGATING IGOR ABOUT THE BRAIN-
-Frederick's "Now, about that brain" is heard over a shot of Inga.
-shortened a shot of Frederick & Igor.
-extended a shot of Inga as Frederick asks if the brain was Hans Delbrook's.
DARTS WITH INSPECTOR KEMP-
-cut Frederick running to look out the window after Kemp leaves.
FRAU BLUECHER FINDS THE MONSTER-
-cut Frau Blucher calling Henry "Victor."
-added a shot of the monster, reversed from later.
-cut Frau Blucher saying the music is "in the blood of all Frankensteins."
-cut Frau Blucher saying that Henry played the music when making his creation.
-cut Frederick calling Henry "Victor."
-tighter cut between Frau Blucher says "My boyfriend" & the machinery sparking.
-cut Frau Blucher yelling "You'll never catch him! He's free!"
THE MONSTER & THE LITTLE GIRL-
-longer fade-in.
-cut before the Monster looks away after breaking the 4th wall.
-extended the Monster looking into the camera.
-added a sound effect as the girl goes through the air.
THE MONSTER & THE BLIND HERMIT-
-cut the hermit saying "Your hand is frozen, my child."
CONFRONTING THE MONSTER-
-cut Frederick's fake laugh as he pleads to be let out of the room.
-cut Frederick's cry for "Mommy!"
-swapped shots of Inga trying to open the door & the Monster growling.
-longer transition into the next scene.
POST-PERFORMANCE BLUES-
-cut Frederick blaming the "bad brain" for the Monster's tantrum.
-the sound of the table lowering begins sooner.
-cut a shot of Frau Blucher watching the table descend.
ELIZABETH & THE MONSTER-
-cut some of Elizabeth combing her hair & singing.
-added an iris wipe while the Monster carries Elizabeth through the woods.
-cut a shot of the searching villagers.
-cut Elizabeth protesting the Monster's advances.
-lowered the volume of Elizabeth's singing.
-cut the 2nd line of the "Mystery of Life" song.
-cut a shot of the searching villagers.
BRINGING THE MONSTER HOME-
-cut Frederick's "Yes" after Igor says "You realize your risking both your lives?"
-re-created the vertical wipe into the next scene.
THE OPERATION-
-re-timed the sound when Igor smacks the machine to match.
THE VILLAGERS BREAK IN-
-cut Inspector Kemp saying "Yeah, I can see that you are the Monster."
-cut the Monster saying "he gave me a calmer brain."
--re-edited the dialog to say "He gave me a calmer way of expressing myself."
-added music to the end of the Monster's speech.
WEDDING NIGHTS-
-added a wipe from Frederick rubbing his head to the Monster reading in bed.
-cut before Fredrick looks away as we zoom in on his eyes.
-re-timed the shot of Igor playing the horn so his movements match the music.
-longer cross-fade from Igor to the final shot of the castle.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits.
-cut the The End card.
POST-CREDITS-
-added a cue from the Main Theme.
-added two shots of the painting of Frederick, normal & smiling.
-re-framed the shots so they line-up.
-cross-fade between the shots so the smile appears in the lightning.
-added my production logo to the end.