Ant-Man: The Pym Particle Partition

Everything looked and sounded great aside from at 34:45, where Hank’s voice makes a noticeable change — that’s my only real audio complaint.

I agree with recordwrangler95 as far as the abruptness in the transition between Scott talking to Luis and then being at the door for Cassie’s party. Maybe move the audio of Scott saying “I’ve got a daughter to take care of” from 02:45 to over Luis’ reaction at 06:30.. then some establishing shot(s) of a nice neighborhood in San Fran. This way there’s an audible queue for where we’re going as well as a visual one.

Recordwrangler’s point about the goat scene is one I sort of disagree with — I think we just cut all the goats. Cutting the remaining one keeps the exposure to Cross limited for the time-being, which keeps from it going from 0-100 too quickly and removes the continuity issue with his and Hope’s clothing.

Right around that time is also when Hank mentions the Avengers “dropping cities out of the sky,” which I personally would consider editing only because it allows for Ant-Man to, without eagle eyes, take place in a perhaps earlier moment in the watch order.. but that doesn’t affect my rating at all.

The only other thing I really take issue with is removing Scott v Falcon. It isn’t fundamental to the plot, necessarily, but it’s a fun scene that gets paid off via a couple lines of dialogue in Civil War that, with this edit, make no sense.

Everything else flowed incredibly well, particularly the reintegration of deleted scenes. They were seamlessly added to the movie and narratively made up for the earlier scenes with Cross and Hank that were removed. The post-credits scene was incredible as well hahaha

Over all, despite its success in reintegrating deleted scenes, this version of the edit could use a bit of continuity/pacing work to make it a replacement for the original film at this time.

I will say when I first watch some of these super hero movies I tend to snooze. Personally I think there are too many. And they try to out subtle joke each other. That being said, this titles with the cuts made it actually kept my attention. And I was interested in what was going on. I am a bit biased here as I watch as many of Bobsons edits as I can. Especially the TV to movie edits, they are fun. As this title is, Bonson for me has a string of good edits going. On my little popcorn scale I will give this a 4.5 out of 5. Only because as I said there are too many super hero movies and like Star Wars sometimes in my mind they bleed together. Looking forward to Bobsons next edit

What else can i say, this is so much better than the TC. Cutting the whole Triskelion prologue serves a better purpose for Scott Lang as a main character while also makes the pacing of the movie flows a little bit better. The deleted scenes also make up a better setup for the heist and Scott's initial meeting with Hank. It's amazing how little cuts and a few deleted scenes can make a movie so much better. This cut is my go-to version from now on. Definitely recommend!

This fanedit keeps the focus where it belongs: on Scott Lang, the main character. We follow along with him as he experiences the world, rather than jumping in early on Hank Pym and all the wranglings over the technology of the suit.

The cuts and edits are flawless. I definitely recommend this fanedit and enjoy it more than the theatrical version. Good job, Bobson!