Son of Frankenstein [raymix]

PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the fanedit.org logo.
-added my fanedit production logo.
TITLE CARD-
-new edit of the Main Theme.
-new "A Rowland V. Lee Film" credit.
-new smokey background.
-new title card.
-removed the opening credits.
CITY COUNCIL MEETING-
-changed "Because of these Frankensteins" to "Because of Frankenstein."
-extended the man's laugh so it doesn't cut off abruptly.
THE TRAIN TO TRANSYLVANIA-
-added train sounds as soon as it's seen fading in.
-added a wide shot as Wolf mentions his mother telling stories of his father.
-cut Wolf blaming the incident with the Monster on the "bad brain."
-smoothed the cross-fade from the train car to the waiting villagers.
ARRIVING IN TRANSYLVANIA-
-added the sound of the trains breaks.
-cut a shot of a sign designating the town of Frankenstein.
-cut a shot of Wolf walking past the Frankenstein town sign.
-removed a jump-cut during the cross-fade into the next scene.
ARRIVING AT THE HOUSE OF FRANKENSTEIN-
-cut a shot of Elsa & Frederick getting out of the car.
-cut Elsa calling their son "Peter." (here, he's Frederick from YOUNG FRANKENSTEIN)
-cut Elsa calling young Frederick "Peter" again.
-shortened the shot of Benson approaching.
IN THE LIBRARY-
-extended the shot of the painting of Henry Frankenstein.
-cut a shot of Wolf stepping closer to the painting.
-Benson's "you're rather like your father" is heard during the painting shot.
-shortened a shot of Wolf & Benson looking up at the painting.
-cut Wolf saying "A miracle the people of Frankenstein call a monster."
-cut Benson saying "Such stories I'd never heard."
-longer beat between "They say a lot worse than that"/"Would you like a brandy?"
-shortened the shot of Benson going to fix a brandy.
PUTTING YOUNG FREDERICK TO BED-
-cut young Frederick's "Our father, help me be a good little boy."
-cut Elsa asking about the beds.
-cross-fade from young Frederick asleep to the angry villagers.
ARRIVAL OF INSPECTOR KROGH-
-cut Elsa & Amelia running down the hallway as the Inspector knocks.
-added a thunder sound to cover a jump-cut in the audio.
-added a thunder sound after Krogh says "You're in danger."
-cut Krogh explaining his military ambitions.
-cut a shot of Krogh walking across the room to remove continuity error.
-cut Elsa checking on young Frederick while Igor peeks in.
AT BREAKFAST-
-cut Wolf calling young Frederick "Peter."
-cut young Frederick asking about the boar's head on the wall.
-cut Wolf calling young Frederick "Peter" again.
-re-timed young Frederick's "Goodbye!"
AT THE OLD LAB-
-added a sound for the rock rolling before it falls.
-shortened the shot of Igor climbing through the hole in the wall.
-re-timed Wolf's "C'mon, c'mon. Hurry it up."
-cut Igor knocking on his neck.
-cut Igor explaining that lightning is what hurt the Monster.
-merged two shots of the Monster into one.
-cut Wolf saying "Evidence of trauma. Exactly like a human being."
CITY COUNCIL MEETING-
-cut "Frankensteinians" from "We Frankensteinians are as nervous as cats."
-added a wide shot of the council.
-added a fade-out to end the scene.
-removed the cross-fade into the next scene.
-longer transition into the next scene.
PREPARING THE MONSTER-
-added a fade-in to begin the scene.
-added sounds for the door lifting.
-cut a shot of Igor coming up through the door.
-shortened a shot of Igor entering the room.
-shortened a shot of the Monster being laid back on the table.
-removed an odd cross-fade between two shots of the Monster.
-shortened Igor opening the door for Benson.
DIAGNOSING THE MONSTER-
-extended a shot of Benson.
-cut a shot of Wolf looking into the Monsters eye.
-cut Wolf saying "Take notes. Heart is contracted. Mental abnormality."
-cut Wolf saying "Definite hyper pituitary." ect.
-cut Wolf saying "That accounts for his great size."
-cut Wolf saying "No human heart can function like that" ect.
-cut a shot of spinning machinery.
-cut a shot of Wolf.
-cut a repeated shot of Igor.
-cut Wolf saying "He's completely super-human."
-cut a cross-fade from a shot of Wolf to Benson & Wolf raising the table.
THE MONSTER'S X-RAY-
-cut Wolf saying "Take notes, Benson."
-cut a shot of Igor.
-added a quick fade-out when Wolf flips the light switch.
-added a long fade-in as the light adjusts.
-shortened a shot of Wolf examining the x-ray.
-cut Wolf saying "Left ventricular preponderance."
-cut Wolf finding & commenting on bullets in the Monster's heart.
-cut a shot of Igor walking over to look at the x-ray.
-added a cross-fade from the x-ray to Wolf at the microscope.
EXAMINING THE MONSTER'S BLOOD-
-cut all of Wolf's comments.
-cut a microscopic shot of the blood.
-cut a shot of Wolf at the microscope.
-cut another microscopic shot of the blood.
-shortened a microscopic shot of the blood.
-added a cross-fade from the blood to Wolf looking at notes.
IGOR & THE CITY COUNCIL-
-moved this scene to later on.
WOLF MONOLOGUES HIS FINDINGS-
-cut Wolf talking about the "Cosmic Rays."
-cut Wolf talking about the Monster being "truly un-human."
-added a shot of Igor, reversed from later.
-cut Wolf wanting to "reveal the Monster's abnormal functions to the world."
REVIVING THE MONSTER-
-cut a shot of the Monster on the table.
-cut Igor touching the Monster, getting shocked & telling Wolf to stop.
-cut a shot of the Monster being electrocuted.
-cut the Monster waking up & attacking Benson before passing out again.
-longer transition into the next scene.
THE INSPECTOR HIRES A SPY-
-cut this entire scene & sub-plot.
IGOR & THE CITY COUNSEL-
-moved this scene from earlier.
-cut the man saying "Body snatcher, you mean."
-cut the pause before the man asks "Did he ask you to rob any graves?"
-cut the discussion about being able to hang Igor a 2nd time.
-longer transition into the next scene.
INSPECTOR KROGH AT THE HOUSE OF FRANKENSTEIN-
-added a long fade-in to begin the scene.
-cut Elsa explaining that Wolf has fixed-up his father's old lab.
-cut Krogh looking up at his spy.
-cut Krogh's spy giving him a knowing nod.
-Elsa's "He's deep in some experiment" is heard over a different shot of Krogh.
-added sound effects when Wolf sets his hat & cane down.
-cut the discussion about the sulfur pit being built by the Romans.
-cut Wolf saying "...and parboil you" as well as the ensuing laughter.
-cut Elsa calling young Frederick "Peter."
-cut young Frederick questioning Krogh's prosthetic arm.
-shortened Wolf carrying young Frederick up to his room.
-Wolf's "Here we go up the mountain" is heard during a different shot.
-cut Wolf calling young Frederick "Peter" again.
-extended the shot of Krogh after Wolf runs off to his lab.
-removed a cross-fade from Krogh to Wolf entering the lab.
WOLF SEARCHES THE LAB-
-cut Wolf opening the lid & going downstairs to search around.
-shortened the Monster looking at himself in the mirror.
-merged two shots of Wolf into one.
-cut some of the Monster comparing itself to Wolf in the mirror.
-shortened the shot of Igor after he says "I keep him here."
-cut some of Igor laughing.
WOLF CONFIDES IN BENSON-
-cut Wolf repeating "Yes, alive! Alive!"
-cut Benson calling young Frederick "Peter."
IGOR LEADS THE MONSTER-
-cut a shot of Igor coaxing the Monster down a hallway.
-cut the duo entering through & then shutting the hidden door.
-cut the Monster bobbing it's head up & down after Igor motions for murder.
-altered the pitch of the wagon sound effects as it comes uphill.
-extended the shot of Igor at the window after the Monster has gone.
-fade-out on the shot of Igor laughing.
-cut a shot of the wagon.
-cut a shot of the Monster in the countryside.
DEATH OF A JUROR-
-slow transition to show some time has passed.
-fade-in on a shot of the Monster in the countryside.
-the sound of the wagon fades in gradually as the Monster looks around.
-darkened the shot of the wagon passing by to match the surrounding shots.
-re-timed the man's first scream to match the Monster's attack.
-added a neck-break sound effect.
-added creaking sounds as the Monster climbs over the wagon harness.
-added a thud sound as the wagon wheel hits the juror.
DINNER AT THE HOUSE OF FRANKENSTEIN-
-cut Wolf repeating that Krogh is their 1st guest.
-cut Wolf bowing a 2nd time before Krogh leaves.
-cut Elsa worrying about Benson.
-cut Wolf leaving the room.
-cross-fade into the next scene.
WOLF SEARCHES FOR BENSON-
-cut Wolf asking about the Monster & Igor saying "He sleeps."
-cut Wolf's "That would scare anyone. I didn't think Benson would come here."
-shortened the shot after Igor slaps Wolf's hand away.
-fade from Wolf & Igor to Krogh at the juror's house.
KROGH AT THE JUROR'S HOUSE-
-shortened the shot of Krogh entering the room.
-shortened the shot of everyone leaving the room.
BEDTIME WORRIES-
-cut Wolf suggesting that Benson went out & got drunk.
-cut Wolf calling young Frederick "Peter" again.
-edited Wolf saying he's sending Elsa to Brussels to be faster, more intense.
-added a close-up of Elsa.
-cut Elsa crying about not as brave as Wolf.
-cut Elsa getting up to go get young Frederick.
-cross-fade from Wolf & Elsa to Elsa, young Frederick & Wolf in bed.
DEATH OF ANOTHER JUROR-
-cut shots of the Monster in the countryside.
-added a thud sound when the Monster strikes the juror.
-longer transition into the next scene.
KROGH STOPS WOLF'S FAMILY PLANS-
-added a fade-in to begin the scene.
-cut Krohg's "So?" after Wolf tells him he's going to the train station.
-cut Krogh ordering breakfast.
-added fade-out as Wolf walks away.
-longer transition into the next scene.
TERROR AT THE APOTHECARY-
-cut the scene of the screaming lady running out into the streets.
KROGH SPEAKS TO YOUNG FREDERICK-
-added fade-in to start the scene.
-cut Krogh asking if young Frederick is scared of the giant.
-extended the shot of Benson's watch, allowing time to read the inscription.
-added sounds for Amelia's footsteps coming into the room.
-removed Amelia calling young Frederick "Peter."
ELSA TALKS WITH WOLF-
-cut Elsa calling young Frederick "Peter."
-lowered the volume of the knocking.
KROGH, WOLF & THE DARTS-
-added the sound of two darts hitting the board as Krogh speaks.
-cut Wolf saying "That's too bad. I've never heard of him."
-added the sound of the dart hitting the board in the close-up.
-cut Wolf laughing after saying "The Monster."
-cut Wolf saying he recreated his fathers table "out of curiosity."
KROGH SEARCH THE HOUSE, WOLF SEARCHES THE LAB-
-cut some of Krogh knocking on the walls.
-added sounds as the wall slides open.
THE MONSTER FINDS IGOR-
-cut the Monster's scream.
-added a cross-fade from the Monster crying to Wolf in his study.
KROGH COMFORTS ELSA-
-cut this entire scene.
KROGH CONFRONTS WOLF-
-cut Wolf asking "Would you like a drink or would you rather play darts?"
-scene ends on a wide shot of Wolf & Krogh.
--extended the duration of the wide shot.
THE MONSTER MORNS IGOR-
-shortened the shot of the Monster carrying Igor.
-re-timed the music.
-shortened the close-up on the Monster.
THE MONSTER WRECKS THE LAB-
-new sound effect when the lab door closes.
-cut the Monster finding the fairy tales book.
THE MONSTER GOES TO YOUNG FREDERICK'S ROOM-
-shortened the Monster walking through the tunnel.
-added sound effects for the false-wall sliding open.
-re-timed the music to sync with the Monster's attack.
-cut away as the Monster grabs Amelia, before she faints.
-shortened a shot of Wolf & Krogh throwing darts.
-added a shot of the Monster dropping Amelia's body, cut earlier.
-shortened a shot of Krogh preparing to throw a dart.
ELSA FINDS FREDERICK MISSING-
-cut Amelia getting up & joining in on the screaming. (she's dead)
-cut Elsa running down the stairs & calling young Frederick "Peter."
EVERYBODY AT THE LAB-
-cut an exterior shot as Wolf, Elsa & Krogh run to the lab.
-removed all calls for "Peter!"
-shortened a shot of Wolf beginning to climb.
-cut before Amelia enters the lab. (she's dead)
-cut before Amelia reaches the embracing family. (she's still dead)
-slo-mo on the family embrace.
-added fade-out as the family embraces.
AT THE TRAIN STATION-
-cut this entire scene.
END CREDITS-
-music is a new edit of the Main Theme.
-added the title card before the credits.
-new card for the cast credits.
-new cards for the crew credits.
-added a credit for the make-up effects by Jack Pierce.
-new card for the director credit.
POST-CREDITS-
-added a shot of Igor at the front gates, reversed from earlier.
-added my production logo.