I like it. But today it doesn’t look as professional as your new fanedits (I don’t like this title sign and there were several choppy jump). I think you should make re-edits and change some things. And cut scene in perfume shop, because an audience and Hannibal know too early that Hannibal knows Pazzi following after him.
P.S: Please, make also xvid/dvdrip version of this movie.