Halloween: Twenty Years Later [raymix]

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the fanedit.org logo.
-added my production logo.
-used my remixed audio for the Dimension Films logo from HALLOWEEN 6.
-new "a Steve Miner film" credit.
MARION COMES HOME-
-fade-in on the shot of the raised knife.
-extended the shot of the raised knife.
-replaced all audio with new sounds in order to remove the Mr. Sandman song.
(slash, stabs, squish, birds, kids playing, lady yelling, feet running, puddle splash, wet tires, engine running/stopping, car door open/close, bike, kids laughing, footsteps, rummaging, keys, broken glass)
-re-scored the scene with pieces of the track He's Dead.
-original audio fades in as Marion runs to the neighbors house.
JIMMY CALLS THE COPS-
-sound of kids playing fades in for a smoother transition into the next scene.
JIMMY CHECKS THE HOUSE-
-shortened the shot of Jimmy turning around before asking "You coming with me?"
-cut Jimmy using his stick to push the door open, removing a continuity error.
-new sound of the front door closing behind Jimmy.
-cut Jimmy saying "Nobody mess with me. I've been suspended five times." ect.
-cut a shot from Jimmy's POV.
-cut Jimmy looking into a room.
-cut Tony saying "We're gonna get messed up!" after Jimmy reveals the stolen beers.
MARION CHECKS HER HOUSE-
-cut a shot of Marion's flashlight shining into the hallway.
-cut Marion going to check the back door after looking out the front door.
-cut a shot of the cops walking up to Marion's house.
-shortened the shots of the cops as Marion is attacked to create a better rhythm.
-added additional sound effects when Marion gets killed. (slicing, blood pouring)
INVESTIGATORS INVESTIGATE-
-added orchestral strings as the detective says "Michael Myers. Yeah, right."
-Main Theme begins sooner after the Detective says "Yeah, right."
TITLE CARD / OPENING CREDITS-
-re-timed the Main Theme.
-moved the Jamie Lee Curtis credit to after the title card.
-new title card.
-added some of the cut collage montage behind the new title card.
-added an echoing sound as the title fades out.
-removed the narration by the Loomis voice impersonator.
LAURIE'S DREAM-
-added echo to the sound of the date changing on the clock.
-added a bass hit as the date changes.
LAURIE WAKES UP SCREAMING-
-cut some of Laurie's screaming.
-shortened the shot of Laurie after John goes to get something to calm her down.
-shortened John looking through all the pill bottles.
HALLOWEEN MORNING-
-re-scored the "Oct. 31, Halloween" titles with pieces of The Main Theme.
-Laurie's "Got mail" begins earlier, over a different shot.
-shortened the shot of Laurie handing John the card.
-shortened the shot of John saying "Today is the day."
-cut John saying "...I can feel it."
-quicker beat between "I'll take you camping." / "I don't wanna go with you."
-quicker cadence on "...chain-smoking methadone addict."
-cut "Who would attract someone like that?" / "Ouch."
-quicker beat between "No, you're not. "/ "Look, mom..."
-cut "It's Halloween." / "Really? I hadn't noticed."
AT SCHOOL-
-added blur to Laurie's imagined reflection of Michael.
ROADSIDE REST STOP-
-cut the mother trying to turn on the lights.
-removed some of the little girl's humming.
-shortened a shot of the mother on the toilet.
-quicker cut after the purse is stolen.
-shortened a close up of the mother's face.
-re-scored the purse theft with different pieces of the track Rest Stop.
-shortened the shot of the little girl shaking her hair out.
-cut the mother looking back & smiling at the girl after hearing her truck start.
SCHOOL ASSEMBLY-
-shortened a shot of Charles arriving.
-additional sound effects when Charles sits down.
-moved Charles' "Hey" to after he sits down.
-cut Sarah & Charles each explaining how they're avoiding the school trip.
LAURIE & WILL-
-cut some of their making out in the doorway.
RONNIE THE SECURITY GUARD-
-quicker beat between "What?" / "Not you, baby."
LAURIE GOES TO TOWN-
-added a subtle bass hit when Laurie sees Michael's reflection in the window.
LAURIE & WILL AT LUNCH-
-cut "So, counsel me." / "Oh no. I love you just the way you are."
-cut Laurie saying "...some night by a warm fire" after "Maybe."
LAURIE DRIVES WILL BACK TO SCHOOL-
-replaced Mr. Sandman with Boogie Woogie Boogieman by The Brian Sisters.
-replaced all sound effects. (engine start, engine running, seat belt, radio button)
-cut Ronnie saying "Psycho."
MOLLY CLEANS DISHES-
-shortened the shot of the dumbwaiter lowering.
MOLLY FOLLOWS THE MAP-
-patched in some missing footstep sounds.
-replaced the cue when John grabs Molly with one from Jamie's Escape. (H6TC)
MOLLY & JOHN IN THE SECRET PARTY ROOM-
-cut a shot of Molly & John looking at the Halloween decor.
-cut John saying "to celebrate" after "I Just thought it in bad taste."
-shortened a shot of John.
-quicker beat between "So why now?" / "Well, there comes a point..."
-cut Molly saying "Really?"
-shortened the shot of John walking towards Molly.
-quicker cadence on John's "what's important, & you are a sterling example..."
-cut John saying "That's how you get my full concentration."
BACK IN CLASS-
-cut John making silly faces at Molly.
BUSSES LEAVE FOR YOSEMITE-
-cut Laurie talking on the phone with someone.
-shortened a shot of the busses driving away.
-shortened a shot of Laurie watching.
-cut Laurie & Norma's stop n' chat.
-shortened a shot of the busses leaving the school gates.
MICHAEL AT THE GATES-
-added a car door closing sound as Ronnie leaves to investigate the truck.
-cut Ronnie's first "Hello?"
-cut a shot of Ronnie looking back out the window.
-cut Ronnie getting back on the phone & putting it down to look outside again.
-cut the shot of the truck's headlights turning off.
-shortened a shot of Ronnie through the window before the phone line gets cut.
LAURIE LOCKS UP-
-cut the first shot of Michael approaching.
-cut the first shot of Laurie closing her eyes.
-cut the second shot of Laurie closing her eyes.
-cut the third shot of Michael approaching.
-shortened a shot of Laurie after Will asks "What are you doing?"
-cut Will seeing Michael.
IN MOLLY & SARAH'S ROOM-
-replaced Scream 2 on the TV with Frankenstein.
--added TV scan lines & VCR tracking effects to the Frankenstein footage.
-extended the first shot of the TV.
-cut the shot of the TV before the camera pans up.
-shortened a shot of Molly & Sarah scrambling after Will leaves.
SNEAKING TO THE PARTY ROOM-
-added a shot of Michael, cut earlier, before John hears a sound.
--flipped the shot so Michael walks in the direction of the sound John hears.
LAURIE & WILL-
-cut Laurie & Will's candy corn kiss.
-cut Laurie revealing who she really is before telling her story.
-added a reaction from Laurie as Will asks "So, who are you?", cut later.
-shortened a shot of Laurie.
-cut Laurie saying "But" before "I got away."
-different cadence on "I got away. But he killed a lot of my friends."
-cut all instances of Will not taking Laurie's story seriously.
-cut Laurie taking a drink from the bottle, removing a continuity error.
LOOKING FOR THE CORKSCREW-
-shortened the shot of the dumbwaiter ascending.
-cut Charles turning the garbage disposal on & off again.
-shortened the shot of Charles turning to see Michael.
-added a bass rumble when Charles sees Michael.
-shortened a shot of Charles reacting.
-cut the close-up of the CGI Michael mask.
-cut a shot of Charles reacting.
-cut the close-up of Michael's eye.
WAITING FOR CHARLES-
-added a door rattle sound.
-cut Sarah seeing Michael's shadow through the glass door.
-replaced Michael's shadow with reversed footage of the door, cut later on.
-cut Sarah going to check the door.
-cut Sarah saying "No sex games until after I've eaten."
-cut a shot of Sarah as she goes up in the dumbwaiter.
-cut Sarah's foot getting caught under Charles' legs.
-shortened the shot of the dumbwaiter descending.
JOHN & MOLLY GO LOOKING-
-cut the shot of the two on the couch.
-cut John turning off the radio.
-cut John saying "Reeks of a cheap jump-scare, doesn't it?"
MICHAEL GETS SARAH-
-cut a shot of Michael raising the knife.
-cut a quick shot of Sarah on the floor.
-added additional slashing sounds.
-re-timed the sound of the final stab to sync.
-cut to black on the final stab.
JOHN & MOLLY SEARCHING-
-cut a shot of the couple walking through storage space.
-cut a shot of them coming down a small set of steps.
-fade-in on the shot of them entering the kitchen.
-shortened the shot of them walking towards the closed door.
-shortened the shot of the door opening.
JOHN & MOLLY ON THE RUN-
-shortened a shot of the couple running.
-cut John saying "Ok?" after "We're gonna go to the dorms & call the cops."
-shortened the shot before John yells "C'mon!"
-shortened a shot of Michael in pursuit.
-shortened a shot of John & Molly at the dormitory gate.
-cut Molly saying "I can't find it!" while fumbling with her keys.
-cut a shot of Michael swinging his knife through the gate.
IN THE GIRLS DORMITORY-
-cut Will repeating "What do we do?"
-cut Laurie's "Try to stay alive."
-cut Laurie telling Will to "Jump."
MISTAKEN IDENTITY-
-Will only fires two rounds.
-inserted a shot of Ronnie on the floor, cut earlier, as Will approaches.
-cut a shot of Laurie approaching Ronnie.
-cut a shot of Laurie & Will checking Ronnie.
-cut a shot of Laurie checking Ronnie.
MICHAEL GETS WILL-
-shortened a shot of Will with the knife in his back.
LAURIE, JOHN & MOLLY ON THE RUN-
-cut a shot of Michael walking down the hallway.
-added a bass hit when Laurie smashes Michael with the fire extinguisher.
-Laurie doesn't have any trouble starting her truck.
-shortened a shot of Laurie after she tells Molly to "Do as I say."
-cut the first shot of Laurie saying "I'll be right behind you."
-cut a shot of John in the backseat.
LAURIE STALKS MICHAEL-
-cut Laurie screaming "Michael!" a second time.
-cut Laurie kneeing Michael in the balls.
-cut a close-up on Michael's bug-eyed face.
-additional Thud sound when Michael lands on the table.
-cut a shot of Laurie kicking a door open.
-cut a shot of Laurie walking down some stairs.
-shortened the spinning shot of Michael on the ground.
LAURIE, MICHAEL & THE VAN-
-cut a shot of Michael on the ground after being thrown from the van.
-cut Laurie saying "C'mon."
-cut a shot of Laurie in the van looking out at Michael on the hood.
-cut a shot of Michael on the hood looking in at Laurie in the van.
CRASH SITE FACEOFF-
-cut Michael pulling at his mask.
-cut Michael reaching out to Laurie.
-cut Laurie touching Michael's fingers.
END CREDITS-
-new edit of the Halloween Theme. (H1)
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-added an echoing sound as the title fades out.
-adjusted the color & contrast of the credits to make the text orange.
-new end credits music. (H1 Theme & Face to Face)
-new music credits reflect this edit's changes.
-added a credit for the Frankenstein footage.
-masked out the H20 logo.
-cut the Dimension Films logo.
POST CREDITS-
-added the jack-o-lantern from the opening of the original Halloween.
--moved the jack-o-lantern to center screen & zoomed in.
--used masks to cover credits text.
-added kids saying "Trick r' Treat!" from the original Halloween.
-added a thunder sound effects.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Michael Kills Judith.