Friday the 13th: Retold [raymix]

CHANGES: (based on the KILLER CUT)
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-augmented the music over the production logos with Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-removed the Platinum Dunes production logo.
-new "A Marcus Nispel Film" credit.
OPENING FLASHBACK-
-new music continues over the opening flashback.
-added additional rain sounds.
-re-framed the opening shot to remove the date.
-added "Friday, June 13th 1980" text to the opening shot.
-extended the shot of the Camp Crystal Lake sign.
-removed the opening credits during the flashback.
-cut Pamela mentioning Jason drowning.
-re-timed some shots during the opening flashback.
-added two shots of Pamela's locket that are exclusive to the Theatrical Cut.
-reversed the first of the two Theatrical Cut shots so the light fades in instead of out.
-slight slo-mo on the final shot of Pamela.
-added an additional thunder sound as Pamela says "Kill for mother."
-added a white-out transition to end the flashback.
NEW TITLE CARD-
-new title & title card. (Friday the 13th- Retold)
-new music. (a remix of Overlay of Evil (F1), Alice Goes to the Lake (F1) & First Kill)
GOING CAMPING-
-removed "Present Day" text.
-added "June 13th, 2007" text
-cut Richie & Wade's "We're gonna be rich" conversation.
-removed details from Wade's Jason story that don't match my new timeline.
-removed the conversation about drinking pee.
-removed the conversation about eating a leg to survive.
-added a shot of Amanda that is exclusive to the Theatrical Cut.
-cut Richie calling Wade's GPS explanation "Dumb shit."
WADE'S DEMISE-
-augmented the music cue when Wade spots Jason with the cue Alice Goes to the Lake. (F1)
IN THE ABANDONED HOUSE-
-cut the rotten food on the table & Mike asking "You hungry?"
-removed the synth sting as the camera pans to the busted TV.
-cut Mike saying "It's a little kid's room."
-cut Mike pointing out the name "Jason" on the bed's headboard.
AMANDA & RICHIE IN THE TENT-
-moved an exterior shot of the tent to the beginning of the scene to establish place.
-cut Richie saying "Right?" after "Let the perv watch."
-cut the two beginning to have sex again after Richie yells to Wade.
-new branch snapping sound effects get their attention the second time.
-cut Amanda having to talk Richie into going out to deal with Wade.
AMANDA'S DEMISE-
-cut a shot of Amanda yelling "Richie!" while inside her burning sleeping bag.
-removed a quick & shaky shot of Amanda inside her burning sleeping bag.
BACK AT THE ABANDONED HOUSE-
-augmented the music cue when Jason attacks Mike with the cue Mrs. V. Watches. (F1)
-augmented the music cue when Jason attacks Whitney with the cue First Kill.
RICHIE'S DEMISE-
-added cracking & splat sounds as Jason's machete makes contact with Richie's head.
-added the cue First Kill as Jason's machete comes down on Whitney.
ORIGINAL TITLE CARD-
-cut the title card, as it now appears earlier.
AT THE GAS STATION-
-removed the "6 Weeks Later" text from the shot of the SUV arriving at the gas station.
-added "Six Weeks Later" text to the shot of the SUV arriving at the gas station.
-tighter edit after Trent asks Lawrence for "a little help."
-Lawrence's "Dude, that's not a good look" begins over a shot of Trent.
-cut Nolan & Trent's "I give a wicked blowjob, too" / "We'll try that later."
-cut Clay saying "Guess I'm an asshole."
AT THE OLD LADY'S HOUSE-
-augmented the music cue when the Lady says "so does HE." with the cue Alice at the Lake. (F1)
AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-cut the conversation about the bobcat.
-quicker beat between "Hoodlums!" / "What do you think they're gonna do?"
-cut Trent asking Jenna to bring him a beer after the "go for a hike" talk.
AT THE WOOD MILL-
-added the sounds of the machinery coming from inside the barn as Clay approaches.
-cut Donnie saying he almost "started the whoop-ass machine" after Clay startles him.
-cut Donnie saying "I wish I had." after Clay asks if he's seen his sister.
-added a shot of Clay after Donnie takes the Missing flyer. (reversed from earlier)
-cut Donnie telling Clay "It's your fuckin' loss, dude."
-cut Donnie calling Clay a "Fucker" as he walks away.
BACK AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-cut some of Nolan's charades behind Chelsea as she invites Trent & Jenna to the lake.
JASON & THE HOCKEY MASK-
-added the Deleted/Alternate version of Jason finding the hockey mask.
-tied Donnie talking to the "Beaver Bear" from the Killer Cut into the Deleted Scene.
-cut Donnie looking at & licking the porn magazine.
-augmented the music cue when Donnie is decapitated with the cue Mrs. V. Watches. (F1)
-tied the Deleted Scene back into the Killer Cut as Jason puts the hockey mask on.
BEER PONG AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-cut Chewie's toast before he "Shoots the Boot".
-improved the cut from "Shooting the Boot" to Nolan & Chelsea on the boat & skiing.
CHELSEA & THE BOAT-
-re-framed & reused a shot of the boat to give it more time to reach Chelsea
-removed the underwater shot of Chelsea before she gets hit by the boat.
-added reverberating bass as Chelsea is hit by the boat.
-augmented the music cue when Chelsea sees Jason with the cue Overlay of Evil. (F1)
-added bass rumble as Chelsea spots Jason on the shore.
CLAY & JENNA GO SEARCHING-
-new music cue continues until Clay & Jenna enter the cabins- Overlay of Evil. (F1)
CLAY & JENNA HIDE-
-augmented the music cue as Clay & Jenna hide from Jason with the cue Overlay of Evil. (F1)
JASON'S UNDERGROUND LAIR-
-added the voice of Jason's mother urging him to kill before he throws a tantrum.
-augmented the music during Jason's tantrum with Mrs. V. Watches. (F1)
-cut to black as Jason slams the door.
-removed Whitney finding Clay's backpack, picking her lock & escaping.
CHEWIE BREAKS THE CHAIR-
-cut Chewie's "Wood Wizard" comment.
-cut Trent telling Chewie to "grab a flashlight."
CHEWIE IN THE STORAGE SHED-
-cut Chewie taking a second drink from the bottle.
AT THE LAKE HOUSE-
-cut Trent's stupid dialog while he's having sex with Brie.
-cut Lawrence preparing to masturbate.
-cut the shot of Whitney running toward the house.
CHEWIE'S DEMISE-
-cut Chewie comparing the hockey stick to his penis.
-augmented the music when Jason appears behind Chewie with Alice Goes to the Lake. (F1)
-increased the volume of the track Chewie Dies during the attack.
AROUND THE HOUSE-
-added an electrical sound when the power goes out.
-cut the rest of Trent & Brie's sex scene along with all the stupid dialog.
-removed Whitney arriving at the house & being re-captured by Jason.
LAWRENCE'S DEMISE-
-cut three shots during Lawrence's walk to the work shed shorter.
-cut a shot of Lawrence walking to the work shed.
-cut Lawrence looking in the work shed window.
-moved a shot of Trent at the window & the group looking around, cut later.
-added a bass rumble when Jason finishes Lawrence off.
-cut Brie yelling "shut up!" as Lawrence is killed.
BACK IN THE HOUSE-
-cut a shot of Trent at the window & the group looking around, now used earlier.
-cut a shot of Trent at the window.
-reversed a shot of Trent at the window.
-cut the shot of Jason on the roof.
-cut the other shot of Jason on the roof.
-Trent doesn't look into the room as long before yelling "He killed Brie!"
ON THE RUN-
-cut a shot of Clay & Jenna running as everyone runs away from the cop car.
-cut Trent's "Where are you, gun?" after he drops in in the water.
-Trent doesn't splash around looking for the gun as much.
-cut Trent's "Fuck it" before he scrambles up out of the water.
-cut Clay & Jenna finding Lawrence's body in the hot tub.
TRENT'S DEMISE-
-shortened the shot of Trent approaching the truck after the driver waves him on.
-cut a shot of Trent walking toward the truck, pointing his flashlight.
-added ripping/cracking/gore sounds as Jason pulls his machete though Trent.
-removed repeated audio from Trent's struggling sounds.
-augmented the music after the kill with the classic "Kikiki Mamama" cue.
-removed Clay & Jenna finding Chelsea's body at the dock.
CLAY & JENNA IN THE ABANDONED HOUSE-
-cut several shots of the couple sneaking through the house.
-cut a shot of Trent rushing into a room.
-cut a POV shot looking into a room.
CLAY & JENNA IN THE TUNNELS-
-cut a shot of the two walking through the tunnels.
ESCAPE WITH WHITNEY-
-added a bass hit when Jenna is stabbed.
-cut Clay's head being smashed through the bus windshield.
-Whitney takes faster action after Clay tells her to run.
-cut a quick shot of Jason beginning to climb down into the bus.
-Whitney says "Fuck you" as she kicks Jason, instead of before.
FINAL SHOWDOWN-
-cut a shot of Whitney sneaking out from her hiding spot.
-cut the montage of various locations.
ON THE DOCK-
-re-scored the scene with Death of Jason (Alternate).
-slo-mo & fade-out on the shot of the locket sinking into the lake.
-removed Jason's return.
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-new music is a remix of End Credits, Overlay of Evil (F1), Alice at the Lake (F1) & First Kill.
POST-CREDITS-
-moved the shot of Jason's mask at the bottom of the lake to post-credits.
-added underwater sound effects.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)