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This was so well done! It flowed so well until the 3rd act; then the edits became more apparent. Once Marty dies, it starts to feel like Tv again. I dont know if you tried to make Sarahs entrance fit w/o the fade or just scrapped everyone's "im sad" scene and just fade in on Jefferson telling the family but either of those would help keep it flowing i feel. I would try to cut some of the cringe fight scenes; they also make it feel like Tv again. Overall, this was amazing to rewatch; you did a fantastic job and I look forward to your other edits!!!