Bride of Frankenstein [raymix], The

PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the fanedit.org logo.
-added my fanedit production logo.
TITLE CARD-
-new music is a remix of The Monster's Entrance & Main Title.
-cut the opening credits.
-new "A James Whale Film" credit.
-new title card.
OPENING-
-cut the storytelling opening.
AFTERMATH AT THE WINDMILL-
-slow fade-in on a shot of the burning windmill.
-added burning sounds throughout the scene.
-added additional shouting & crumbling sounds to the first two shots.
-slight slo-mo the first three shots.
-cut Minnie saying "That's the best fire I saw in all me life!"
-added sound effects to accompany the flame flare-ups.
-the sound of the villagers walking away builds instead of beginning suddenly.
HENRY TAKEN AWAY-
-the sound of the villagers dissipates instead of stopping abruptly.
-cut Minnie saying "...to that lovely girl, Elizabeth."
HANS HAS TO SEE-
-added burning sounds.
-added sounds when Han's Wife collapses.
-added splashing sounds for Hans & the Monster.
-added a splash sound when Han's Wife hits the water.
-removed the flutes when Minnie gets scared by the Monster.
-cut two shots of Minnie scared & screaming.
-extended a close-up on the Monster.
-added a cue from The Monster's Entrance as Minnie runs away.
-smoother audio transition into the next scene.
AT THE HOUSE OF FRANKENSTEIN-
-cut the man knocking on the door & ringing the bell.
-cut an odd shot of the wagon after Elizabeth comes to the door.
-replaced the wagon shot with a shot of the messenger stepping forward.
-cut two shots of Minnie running & screaming across the courtyard.
-cut a shot of Henry being brought up the stairs.
-cut Minnie trembling after telling Albert that the Monster is still alive.
-cut Minnie's "Nobody believes me" speech.
THE HOUSE IN MOURNING-
-cut Elizabeth saying she was foretold to beware her wedding night.
-added a fade-out to end the scene.
-cut Minnie crying.
IN HENRY'S ROOM-
-slower fade-in to begin the scene.
-cut Henry's "I could have trained him to do my will. I could have bred a race."
-Henry's "I might even have found the secret to eternal life" is over a shot of Elizabeth.
-extended a shot of Elizabeth.
-cut Elizabeth saying "We are not meant to know such things."
-cut Elizabeth's hysterics & claiming to see Death in the room.
THE ARRIVAL OF DR. PRETORIUS-
-cut Minnie repeating "Pretorius?" a 2nd time.
-cut Elizabeth's "Who's there?" & Minnie's "It's Minnie, my Lady."
-cut Elizabeth's "I do hope he won't upset Henry" as she leaves.
PRETORIUS' CREATIONS-
-cut Pretorius getting his box & then getting the jars out of the box.
-added music as Pretorius prepares to reveal his creations.
-removed the little mermaid.
-extended a shot of Henry & Pretorius.
-cue from The Monster's Entrance ends the scene.
-slower fade-out on Pretorius.
CHASED THROUGH THE WOODS-
-added a sound effect when the Monster drops the boulder on the men.
-cut all of Minnie's input as the Monster is being tied up.
-added a sound when the Monster is thrown onto the wagon.
IMPRISONING THE MONSTER-
-cut three shots of the Monster being brought down into the dungeon.
-extended a shot of the Monster being carried down a hallway.
-cross-fade from a shot of the Monster on the rail to being chained to the chair.
-shortened a shot of the Monster chained to the chair.
-cut Minnie commenting from the window & being shooed away.
-smoothed a jump-cut in the audio.
-cut the Burgomaster & the guards commenting as they leave.
THE MONSTER IS LOOSE-
-cut "Frau Newman" from the woman's "Where's his wife, Frau Newman?"
-cut Minnie repeating "Frau Newman?"
TRAVELERS IN THE WOODS-
-cut the man saying "He's safe in jail & they'll keep him there."
-shortened a shot of the Monster approaching to match the next.
THE MONSTER & THE BLIND HERMIT-
-removed the Monster's growl as it opens the door.
-shortened a shot of the blind man leading the Monster to the bed.
-longer transition from The Blind Man's Thanks into The Monster's Lessons.
HUNTERS AT THE HERMITS HOUSE-
-removed a jump-cut during the struggle between the Monster & hunter #1.
-added a reaction shot of hunter #2.
-added additional fire sounds.
-cut the Monster scaring some children.
-cross-fade from the burning house to the cemetery.
CHASED THROUGH THE CEMETERY-
-new cross-fade removes Boris standing to the side waiting for his cue.
-adjusted the volume & EQ as the villagers run through the graveyard.
DOWN IN THE CATACOMBS-
-Pretorius' "Read the inscription" is heard over a shot of the Monster watching.
-shortened a shot of Karl clearing things away.
-cut Karl reading the date on the grave.
-removed the sound of Ludwig blowing a raspberry after opening the coffin.
-cut a shot of pretorius laughing.
-cut a shot of the Monster watching.
-removed some of Pretorius' laughs.
PRETORIUS' ULTIMATUM-
-cut Henry saying "There, I knew it" when Minnie announces Pertorius.
ELIZABETH & THE MONSTER-
-cut Minnie worrying before leaving the room.
HENRY'S DEAL WITH PRETORIUS-
-cut Henry saying "But, if you can bring her back, I'll do anything you ask."
WORKING IN THE LAB-
-extended the establishing shot of the laboratory.
-cut Henry saying he hopes the heart keeps going, before Karl mentions it's freshness.
-cut Pretorius explaining the telephone.
-extended the exterior shot of the lab as the storm begins.
-cut Karl yelling for Ludwig to get the kites ready.
-cut a shot of Karl & Ludwig on the roof.
-adjusted the EQ & volume as the kites are launched.
-darkened the shots of the flying kites.
-cut some repeated shots of machinery.
-cut the Monster throwing the bad dummy of Karl.
-added a sound effect when the kite is struck by lightning.
-added a sound effect when lightning sparks the cosmic diffuser.
-shortened a shot of the Monster contemplating Pretorius' warning.
-added additional explosion & crumbling sounds as the lab is destroyed.
-combined two shots of the exploding lab into one.
END CREDITS-
-new music is a remix of Main Title & The Monster's Entrance.
-added the title card before the credits.
-new card for the cast credits.
-the character Albert is credited by name instead of "Butler."
-new card for the crew credits.
-added a credit for the make-up effects by Jack Pierce.
-new card for the director credit.
-cut the The End card.
POST-CREDITS-
-added Baron toasting "A son to the house of Frankenstein." (from FRANKENSTEIN)
-added a cue from The Creation.
-added my production logo.
-added a cue from The Monster's Entrance.