Birthday Presents

Very sweet and charming fanedit.
I would have maybe added one or two shots a bit more "hot" in the old movies reels to had even more sexual tension between the characters who are watching. But maybe it would no have been as sweet and charming ;)
Thank you for your work.

Consecution short.
Highly inventive subversion of the dark classic, "Peeping Tom.".
I shall not go into the sleight of hand TM2YC employs, but he manages to change this unpleasant British Noir thriller into a ripe romantic interlude.
The future for this couple is hopeful, even if it is the intoxication of attraction and infatuation.
The editor has overlaid a new music soundtrack, a bit heavy handed, that muffles some of the dialogue.
Not a major complaint, though it is noticeable.
Thank you also for opening and closing titles. Many editors do not bother.
Credits help mark the difference between a fragment and a short.

A nice short that is quite a transformation from the source material. The editing is very well done. Narratively, Mark still comes off like a bit of a psycho in the beginning. There is a slight implication that he might be watching porn or snuff. Having him view something a bit tamer might have better sold that he was just a lonely, but harmless guy. A minor point though, and there is a lot of great editing on display!