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To start I just want to say this idea of combining these two movies is really cool and I'm into it. Really. Two mediocre movies combined can become a new interesting take that by themselves they couldn't be. These FanMixes are some of the most interesting to me. I want to help get this thing right. But it isn't where it needs to be yet. This edit is not finished and I will update my review when it is fixed. The timestamps marked TECHNICAL are things that need to be fixed. The other notes are going to just be suggestions, ideas, or thoughts.

00:11 - TECHNICAL - big audio pop
01:15 - Massage this cut a little better. The switch from her to him is very awkward. What other ideas could we do?
04:33 - TECHNICAL - Audio skips
04:36 - TECHNICAL - Audio skips
05:52 - TECHNICAL - Audio skips
05:57 - TECHNICAL - Audio skips

I was unable to continue watching at this point with how glaring these issues were. These aren't just narrative choices that aren't good. These are clear and present errors within the editing process.