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I must say this outright, I removed 1 point for visuals because nothing is ever perfect.
I enjoyed every bit of this edit as well as I enjoyed the original. It’s only when watching this edit that I realized the original was guiding us a little too much from time to time. Scribbling Man removed those small bits where our hands were held and let us loose inside the Shimmer. Everything works fine. The music plays a more subtle role. I think the original score is good. It’s bringing some sensibility, maybe even some comfort (thinking about the folk guitar). In Scribbling Man edit, the music seems to be there only for tension, or weariness.
I was impressed with the original movie visuals and wondered how the editor inserted their name in the credits. It’s only when I watched it again that I saw the trickery. But again, every other visual cuts are good. Bravo!