August 18, 2017
I've liked this edit very much. It has a fast pace and on to the point, although i think some of Khadgar's inexperience scenes could have remained so that we can see his progress over the course of the movie. That and his and Alodi's meeting.
I've spotted one bad transition here 00:13:01 - 00:13:05, you should be able to see it in slow motion.
Overall, good work.