Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey - Arkenstone Edition, The

Straight from the forum:

After having read through the thread and watching the edit, I don't have much to add but my own thanks for such a fantastic rework of the film. The pacing is far better than the original, the themes more consistent and less heavy-handed, the score fluid and engaging. There was perhaps one awkward cut during the White Council meeting, but if I hadn't known it was an edited version of the film, I likely wouldn't have noticed. Perhaps it's my audio setup, but I didn't have any issues with dialog volumes. I really appreciate your take on the overuse of CGI (i.e. best to be left on the cutting room floor), as it's becoming a worse and worse part of the series. I'm already looking forward to your take on DoS, if only to have that damn barrel scene fixed.

Hi!

I am not a Top reviewer, just one of those users lurking in the shadows and not skilled enough to make my own fanedits -even though I've tried several times-.

So I must first say: THANK YOU. I am a fan of your work, Kerr, and I was waiting for this movie edit eagerly. Even if I enjoyed the theatrical version of the film, I found many scenes to be out of place and wanted so bad to see this kind of work with it...

The video and especially the sound in your edit are brilliant. It is very difficult to realise when something has been cut or added, and the blending with the music is close to perfect. Howard Shore must be proud!

The movie is faster and a better cinematic experience than the original, which I keep in my living room in Blu-Ray, but this is a great complement to it.

However I would like to point out two elements that I found disturbing when I watched the movie and that I have been surprised to find that are still in your version:

1) Saruman at Rivendell. For me it was a let down to see Saruman in the movie. If I am not wrong, Saruman does not appear in the movie. The whole council scene was too urgent and forced. For me, it felt like the Lord of The Rings movie could start anytime soon, and Saruman is blatantly rude... I expected him at least to be more subtle. I would like to see a version that takes Saruman away, but I don't know if Peter Jackson has other intentions for this character in the upcoming movies.

2) Thorin's sword when he is knocked out. Before blacking out, Thorin tries to reach the sword with his right arm and fails. Then when the eagle comes, it takes Thorin and by some sort of magic (or obvious filming mistake) the sword is next to Thorin's body, so much that the eagle takes Thorin and the sword easily. I usually forgive this kind of mistakes in a movie, but this one was too obvious for me and I hoped that a fanedit would fix this detail. There is no need to show Thorin trying to reach the sword and failing. I believe!


All in all, it is a great, close-to-perfect edit. Just hoped it to fix these 2 elements!

Thank you, anyhow! Terrific job.

This was a jolly good fanedit. The pacing is much much better. A worthy alternative to the Theatrical and Extended cuts. I look forward to the eventual kerr fanedit complete set(s).

A/V quality: 10
Editing: 10 visual, 9 audio
Narrative: 9
Enjoyment: 9 (original 8)

Recommended drink: Grass Hopper

First of all, I should say that I haven't yet viewed my copy of the official Hobbit Extended Edition (As it's in it's still in it's cellophane upstairs awaiting Xmas morning) so I approach this review with only knowledge of the Theatrical cut. Secondly I didn't read the cutlist until after viewing it, so these are the reactions I had without that knowledge...

Audio/Video Quality 8/10: The look of the original Hobbit was horrible and cartoony (It brought back unpleasant memories of Indy4 IMO) and needs somebody to bring it visually in line with the nicer looking LOTR trilogy. The MP4 of Kerr's edit looked fine quality wise but I'm not sure the colour correction was a huge improvement overall. Some scenes did look massively improved, some looked very slightly worse and some still looked cartoony. I appreciate the effort though.

Visual Editing 10/10: Absolutely first class. I never felt jarred out of the experience by any removals (And there were many) and every cut was well handled and smooth to my eye. Clever little moments like using a shot of a doubtful Gandalf at the end of the council scene to change his motivation were wonderfully subtle (The faneditor in me was almost going to applaud at that bit but sadly this change was oddly contradicted in the later cave scene). From the cutlist it seems footage from LOTR was used in places but despite my near-obsession with those films none of it drew my attention as an obvious addition (It must have been blended very skilfully).

Audio Editing 9/10: Amazing and ambitious work on this front. The many changes/restorations to the score are wonderful to hear and without exception an improvement on the original. Obviously changing this amount of music required a lot of sound FX work to cover it. For the most part this was also beautifully handled but the final 'Out of the frying pan...' scene wasn't quite right. The sound FX felt a bit sparse and empty but given the complexity of this action scene nothing short of full Foley team was going to sort that out. Luckily the new/restored music in this scene was the best in the whole edit so I could easily forgive the sound FX issues.

Narrative 10/10: For me this is the edits crowning achievement. If I was to say the pacing in this edit was slower than the Theatrical cut I really do mean that as high praise. Instead of the stop-start/slow-quick/dialogue-action uneven pace of the original I just viewed a measured, well-judged and consistently paced cut. It felt like scenes like Bag End and Rivendell were given the time to breathe and us as viewers given the time to soak up the middle earth atmosphere. Then the action scenes were better cut, shortened or skilfully removed entirely. To put it simply, nothing overstayed it's welcome and nothing felt rushed.

Enjoyment 10/10: This was a joy to view from start to finish. I dimmed the lights and armed myself with a mug of ale and various cheeses and crackers (To fill up the corners) Hobbit style but instead enjoyed the filmic feast Kerr has created. If I had to find big fault, it would be in the retention of the truly awful Thorin scene at the end (I was very happy with Menbailee's removal in his cut) but again Kerr's new music improved on even this... making it at least bearable. A short list of my favourite changes (Music aside) would be the total removal of the Goblin chase (Not missed for a second), the removal of Radagast's first scene (Despite my love of Slyvester McCoy) and I loved the removal of many little silly moments throughout.

“Some stories deserve a little less embellishment...”

Kerr’s tagline perfectly captures the woes and shortcomings of The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey. The tag further extends to the recently released extend edition also, Arkenstone Edition aims to tell a tighter and more streamlined introduction into Peter Jackson’s Hobbit films. Kerr has marvellously achieved just that (and a little more).

Having watched the (easy on the downloads) mp4. version of the edit there is an understandable degradation of video quality, this can be seen in scenes that feature indicate details such as the many thousands of gold coins within the halls of Erebor. The compression artefacts can be noticeable at times, however this is a necessary sacrifice to obtain the more desirable download of only 3.37 GB. The audio quality appears to be top notch, no issues were heard due to the compression.

The visual editing is high quality, the cuts are smooth and unnoticeable. Having watched the Extended Edition not too long ago, I was delighted to find none of Kerr’s cuts jarring. Coupled with intricate audio editing all the transitions flowed perfectly. The re-structure of the Rivendell scenes was highly impressive and aided the film’s pacing and Bilbo’s growth as a character. Kerr’s cutlist mentioned a slight colour correction which unfortunately was undetected by me. A harsher correction that removes the cartoon-like vividness of the picture would certainly aid in bringing An Unexpected Journey closer to the visual style of The Lord of the Rings.

The way Kerr replaces the film’s score with Howard Shore’s original compositions is uncanny, while (as I understand it) the mp4. version has some audio balancing issues such as Bilbo’s faint voice over the new music in the edit’s introduction. Upon reviewing the scenes that had musical replacements multiple times (I have an affinity for these kinds of things) there was no part where I could hear the faint echoes of The Lord of the Rings’ score. In many sections the audio has been rebuilt from scratch and mostly it is brilliantly done. However the reconstruction of the audio during the scene where the company is saved by the eagles could have had further work done. This section felt somewhat hollow audibly. Other than this one grip, the audio is well done in general. One moment that particularly stood-out as great audio editing was the removal of the Nazgul theme when Thorin confronts the pale orc.

Overall Kerr’s Arkenstone Edition focuses the narrative into a tighter-paced and much more enjoyable experience. The shorter running time also encourages the chance for multiple viewings without thinking of having to endure the computer generated mess that many of the action scenes embraced. Kerr has nicely done away with the over-the-top antics that were present in the troll fight and the escape from goblin town. Arkenstone Edition sets a brisk pace yet still allows for the extra subplots to naturally flow and expand foreseeing the possibilities of the two remaining Hobbit sequels.