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This edit was generally internally consistent and of solid quality - I would recommend it to anyone. I only noticed one slightly awkward moment in changing the narrative. It’s possible I found it awkward because I wasn’t expecting a change there though. :)

I agree with a previous reviewer that cutting canto bight effectively cuts Finn, but I find that doesn’t bother me too much (even though I like his character). This feels more like the original trilogy as the corny humor is gone (yes!).