Despite the criticisms of previous posters, I actually quite enjoyed this edit. Apart from some jarring music changes between cuts, I think he accomplished the almost impossible. Maybe someone could smooth over the cracks, and digitally alter the Luke and Leia scene so they are on the ground instead, but the story still seems to work without the ewoks. It makes the Imperials seem inadequate as a ground force on Endor, even though the Emperor mentions the trap for the rebels.
If I were to edit this myself, I would leave some Ewok action in place, and make them less cutesy and fun.
Though the video and audio is a bit lacking I quite liked the idea of the edit. Maybe removing all of the ewok scenes wasn’t the best idea as the story does make too many jumps and ruins the continuity, but all in all it’s a good concept. It’s not a 5 due to the technical issues, but the concept makes it better than a 3 so I gave it a 4 star. Definitely has potential!