Review Detail
9.6 7 10
(Updated: October 04, 2023)
Overall rating
9.2
Audio/Video Quality
10.0
Audio Editing
10.0
Visual Editing
10.0
Narrative
7.0
Enjoyment
8.0
The original story for me was a 6/10 and this edit made it a 7/10, so you did manage to improve it slightly!
The edit is done flawlessly. No cuts noticed, music was smooth, audio was great! The flashbacks were a great tool for keeping the story tight, but you may have needed more of them.
Unfortunately in the end I struggled with the disjointed timeline, and there were loose threads spread throughout that I struggled to keep up with (which I won't detail here), and the new ending feels a bit like a dream sequence.
You made a lot of tough choices but I think you worked with what you had. There just may not have been enough freedom to really fix the story, but you tried and partially succeeded!
The edit is done flawlessly. No cuts noticed, music was smooth, audio was great! The flashbacks were a great tool for keeping the story tight, but you may have needed more of them.
Unfortunately in the end I struggled with the disjointed timeline, and there were loose threads spread throughout that I struggled to keep up with (which I won't detail here), and the new ending feels a bit like a dream sequence.
You made a lot of tough choices but I think you worked with what you had. There just may not have been enough freedom to really fix the story, but you tried and partially succeeded!
User Review
Do you recommend this edit?
Yes
Format Watched?
Digital
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