Halloween: Season of the Witch [raymix]

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the fanedit.org logo.
-added my production logo.
-scored the production credits with the track Halloween III Close/Open.
-added a bass rumble when the Universal logo comes into focus.
-new "a Tommy Lee Wallace film" credit.
TITLE CARD / OPENING CREDITS-
-added TV static & distorted voice sound effects to the interference shots.
-new title card removes the III from the title.
-added a bass hit when the title appears.
-the top line doesn't disappear during the Carpenter/Hill production credit.
-adjusted the color of an interference shot from grey to orange.
-added a "trick r' treat!" sample from the original HALLOWEEN.
--added digital distortion & modulation to the voice sample.
MAN ON THE RUN-
-shortened the shot of the man running toward camera.
-added "Northern California" title.
-added "October, Saturday the 23rd" title.
-shortened a shot of the man running into the car lot.
-cut the man running up to & trying the first locked door.
-shortened the shot of the car stopping at the gate.
-shortened the shot of the man ducking to hide.
-cut the man attempting to climb a fence before the car comes back.
ATTACKED-
-shortened a shot of the car rolling toward the assailant.
-cut a shot of the car rolling.
-added a squishing & crunching sound as the assailant is smashed between the cars.
-shortened a shot of the assailant being smashed between the cars.
-shortened the shot of the man crawling out from between the cars.
-fade-out on the shot of the man running away.
-cut the camera panning up after the man gets away.
AT THE SERVICE STATION-
-cut the "One Hour Later" title.
-fade-in on the establishing shot.
-extended the establishing shot.
-increased the volume on the TV news report, emphasizing it's importance.
-cut the station attendant checking the 2nd set of windows.
AT THE HOSPITAL-
-cut the crossfade from the assailant arriving outside to back in the hospital room.
-cut Dr. Daniel asking "Who's next?" & the Nurse's "Nobody."
-cut two shots of empty hallways.
-shortened the shot before the assailant starts walking.
-cut the assailant making a fist before reaching down to grab the man's face.
-cut a shot of the man looking at the assailant's fist.
-cut the man closing his eyes a 2nd time to remove a continuity error.
-added a splat sound as the man's skull is broken.
-shortened the shot of the man's arm going limp.
-cut the man's hand twitching after he dies.
-cut another shot of the man's hand.
-cut a shot of Daniel shaking off sleep as he goes to investigate the scream.
-cut a continuity error with the assailant's lighter.
-shortened two shots for a smoother car explosion.
-patched in missing burning sounds at the beginning of a shot.
-fade-out on the shot of Daniel contemplating the Silver Shamrock logo.
THE NEXT MORNING-
-cut the "Sunday the 24th " title along with the shot of the burned out car.
-fade-in on the shot of Daniel looking out the window.
-extended the shot of Daniel looking out the window.
-added "Sunday the 24th" title.
AT THE CORONER'S OFFICE-
-fade-in on the shot of the Coroners' door.
-cropped the shot of the door to remove the "Wednesday the 27th" title.
-added "Wednesday the 27th" title.
-cut Daniel & Coroner Teddy talking about their past together.
AT THE BAR-
-cut the advertisement for HALLOWEEN on the TV.
-cut Daniel saying "...and I don't know what's going on."
-cut a shot of Daniel.
AT THE SHOP-
-cut a shot of Daniel.
-fused two shots of Ellie into one.
-shortened a shot of Ellie before she looks up at Daniel.
-traffic sounds fade in for a smoother transition into the next scene.
ON THE PHONE-
-added new music in the background. (I Ran by Flock of Seagulls)
-cut all audio after Daniel hangs up in order to replace the music.
--rebuilt all sounds effects.
(traffic, car running, cans, footsteps, door open/close, car driving away)
ON THE ROAD-
-shortened the shot of the farmer.
-shortened the shot of the car approaching the Santa Mira sign.
-cut Ellie & Daniel's "Irish Halloween masks?" / "In Cali.? You never know."
AT THE MOTEL-
-shortened the shot of Ellie when Daniel enters the room.
-shortened the shot of Daniel closing the door.
-cut the conversation about where to sleep.
-cut the make-out.
CURFEW MESSAGE-
-cut two shots that seem to be at the wrong time of evening.
-cut a shot of a back alley shed.
-cut a shot of a security camera.
-cut a shot of security camera footage.
IN THE ALLEY-
-cut the man saying "He made this town what it is; A dry piece of nothing."
-cut the man talking about his plan to burn down the factory.
-cut "for them" from the man's "Last Halloween for them."
-edited the man's first "Last Halloween" for emphasis & to sound more intelligible.
-cut some of the man's bumbling around the junk yard.
-cut the man making a cheeze-wiz sandwich.
-cut the man saying "Fellas, I was just joking!"
-cut the assailant removing & tossing the man's hat.
-cut a shot of the two assailants & the man on his knees.
-additional ripping sounds as the assailant's pull off the man's head.
BACK AT THE MOTEL-
-cut Ellie getting out of the shower.
-cut Marge getting into bed.
-cut Ellie & Daniel beginning to have sex.
-replaced a shot of Ellie & Daniel having sex with a shot of the motel, cut earlier.
-a second bug begins to climb out of Marge's mouth before we cut away.
-fade-out on the shot of bugs crawling out of Marge's mouth.
-added crawling bugs & rattle snake sound effects.
-cut a shot of Marge's feet under the blankets.
-cut Daniel waking up & getting out of bed naked.
-cut a shot of the Silver Shamrock van & personnel.
-cut Daniel putting on his shirt.
-fade-in on the shot of the Silver Shamrock personnel loading Marge into the van.
CHECKING WITH THE CORONER-
-cropped the shot of the factory to remove the "Saturday the 30th" title.
-added "Saturday the 30th" title.
-cut Daniel & Teddy talking about going on dates.
-Teddy's "Bye." is heard over the shot of Daniel.
--added effects so Teddy's "Bye" seems to be coming through the phone.
ON THE FACTORY TOUR-
-shortened the shot of Ellie & Daniel by the door after the Kupfer family arrives.
-cut the "Hall of Fame" toy room.
-extended a shot of the "Final Processing" doors.
-cut "Oh, sure!" from Mr. Kupfer's "My opinion? Oh, sure!"
-cut Mrs. Kupfer telling Ellie how Cocoran became one of the worlds richest men.
-cut "always" from Cochran's "Your opinion has always meant a great deal to us..."
DAN ON THE RUN-
-cut Daniel talking to the operator recording on the pay phone.
DANIEL IN THE FACTORY-
-cut the "Hall of Fame" toy room.
-cut the old lady robot.
-retimed the assailant grabbing Daniel to be in time with the music.
-shortened a shot of the dead assailant on the floor.
-Cochran's "Ah! Mr. Challis." is heard earlier, over a different shot.
-inserted a shot of the dead assailant on the floor, cut earlier.
-cut Cochran talking about the old lady robot.
-cut Cochran telling Daniel he thinks he'll "find this all interesting."
-cut the "Oct. 31st Halloween" titles.
-cut the shot of the morning countryside.
-cut Cochran the assailants leading Daniel outside.
-cut the shot of the Final Processing doors.
-cut the assailant sneezing.
-cut Cochran talking about how obedient his robots are.
MASK TEST-
-added a locking sound after the door closes.
-shortened a shot of Cocoran.
-shortened a shot of the assailants leading Daniel away.
HALLOWEEN MORNING-
-added "Sunday 31st, Halloween" titles.
-cropped footage to remove all place names.
-all new place name titles.
-re-arranged place names so they run from the west to east.
-rearranged a few of the location shots.
-cut the shot of the girl on the skateboard.
-cut the Omaha NE, Dayton OH, Phoenix AZ & Baton Rouge LA titles.
-added Roswell NM, Springfield MO, Athens GA & Pittsburgh PN titles.
-cut the shot of Daniel's kids watching TV.
AT THE CORONER'S-
-cut the assailant sneaking around & stealing the drill.
-cut Teddy calling another examiner after she can't get through to Daniel.
BACK AT THE FACTORY-
-cut the shots of Main Street & the motel.
-shortened the establishing shot of the factory.
-cut Cochran saying "Enjoy the Horror-Thon, Dr."
-Daniel's "Why, Cochran? Why?" is heard over the establishing shot.
-shortened the first shot of Cochran & Daniel.
-quicker cadence on "Mr. Kupfer was right you know. I do love a good joke."
-longer beat before "And this is the best one."
-re-scored the rest of the scene with parts of the track I Think It's Time.
-cut Cochran saying "Oh, and Happy Halloween."
-added Cochran saying "Enjoy the Horror-Thon, Dr", cut earlier.
-switched the HALLOWEEN footage on TV with footage from HOUSE ON HAUNTED HILL.
--adjusted the color & added TV effects to the footage.
-removed & rebuilt all sounds in order to remove the audio coming from the TV.
(TV dial, footsteps, door close, straps, chair moving)
-music & sounds from HOUSE ON HAUNTED HILL play in the background.
-shortened the shot of Cochran leaving the room.
-cut Daniel checking the clock a 2nd time.
-cut the pan up to the security monitor once the attendant starts flipping switches.
-shortened an over-the-shoulder shot of Daniel.
-original audio resumes as Daniel kicks the TV.
-additional sound effects when the TV is smashed. (electricity & sparking)
-shortened the shot of Daniel struggling free.
ESCAPE FROM THE FACTORY-
-cut the assailants holding the mask & vent cover up to the camera.
-added a sound effect that gets Daniel's attention after Linda hangs up. (elevator)
-cut Daniel starting to redial Linda after she hangs up.
-shortened the shot of Daniel sneaking away from the phone.
-cut a shot of Daniel & Ellie running through the rafters.
-added a bass rumble as the block of Stonehenge begins to glow.
-added the static & distorted voices from the opening as the ring begins to spin.
-extended the shot of the lasers blasting Cochran.
-added the laser sound effect used earlier when Marge was killed.
-cut the shot of Cochran turning to stone & disappearing.
-crossfade from Cochran being blasted to the Stonehenge block exploding.
-slight crop on the shot of exploding Stonehenge.
-cut an out-of-place shot during the explosion.
ESCAPE FROM SANTA MIRA-
-adjusted color on two shots so the foreground better matches the red sky.
ROBO-ELLIE ATTACKS-
-shortened a shot of Daniel preparing to smack Robo-Ellie with the crowbar.
-cut the arm attacking on it's own.
-cut the headless body battle.
-lowered the volume of the servos during the shot of Robo-Ellie's head.
-fade-out on the shot of Daniel running away, mirroring the man at the beginning.
AT THE SERVICE STATION-
-fade-in on the shot of the attendant at the fuel pump.
-added static & distorted voice sounds as the Silver Shamrock ad plays.
-added a shot of TV video effects from the opening credits.
-added an electrical cut-out sound effect, ending all audio & video.
END CREDITS-
-longer beat before the credits begin.
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-scored the title card with pieces of the track South Corridor.
-re-timed the end credits music. (Chariots of Pumpkins)
-adjusted the color & contrast to make the credits text blue.
-added a credit for the Flock of Seagulls song.
POST CREDITS-
-added a shot of the Witch mask from the preview trailer.
--adjusted contrast & sharpness to better match the bluray footage.
--additional photoshop work to remove print damage.
-added a bass rumble when the eyes open.
-fade-out on the open eyes.
-added my production logo.
-added a cue from the track Halloween III Main Theme.