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This was an interesting edit. It is courageous in that it banks 100% on your ability to conjure up images to accompany the very clever, well acted out narrative. However, as much as I love novel cinematic approaches, trying to get through it with absolutely no visual cues was trying at times and only works for so long. My suggestion would be to include something in the future to anchor a cinematic audience, be it photos (like le jetee, the other short), animation, etc. All in all a good effort and an interesting story. Nice work.