Friday the 13th Part 8 - Jason Takes Manhattan [raymix]

CHANGES:
PRODUCTION CREDITS-
-added the Fanedit.org logo
-added my production logo.
-scored the production logos & director credit with Overlay of Evil [ray's Ghost mix].
-new "A Rob Hedden Film" credit.
TITLE CARD-
-cut the title card.
-removed the opening credits & New York montage.
ON THE HOUSE BOAT-
-added "Thursday, May 12th 1988" text to the opening shot.
-removed Jason being resurrected by electrocution.
-added an echoing bass hit as Jason's hands grab the ladder.
-added rumble when Jim scares Suzy with the hockey mask & fake knife.
-cut the fake knife stab when Jim scares Suzi with the hockey mask.
-cut Jason loading the speargun.
-cut a shot of Jason after he kills Jim.
TITLE CARD-
-new title card.
-new title music. (The Ghost People [raymix] )
-added sound effects during the new title.
ARRIVING AT THE PIER-
-shortened a shot of Mrs. VanDeusen handing Rennie the gift.
-Mrs. VanDuesen's "Rennie.." begins on the previous shot.
-shortened a shot of Mrs. VanDuesen speaking to Rennie.
-Mrs. VanDuesen's "...it's you." is heard on the following shot of Rennie.
BOARDING THE SHIP-
-added "Friday, May 13th" text to the shot of the graduates arriving at the pier.
-cut Mrs. VanDuesen & Charles discussing what's best for Rennie.
-the boat's horn begins to sound on the shot of Jason climbing out of the lake.
-cut the nameless Deckhand doing the Crazy Ralph routine.
SETTING SAIL-
-cut the shot of guys shooting targets.
-shortened the shot of Rennie walking towards Sean.
-shortened the shot of Sean before he kneels down to pet Toby.
-removed some strange rustling sounds before Sean pets Toby.
-shortened the shot of Sean petting Toby.
-moved Rennie's "We changed our Minds" to make the conversation more natural.
-cut "But I didn't get you one." / "Oh forget it." after Sean give Rennie a gift.
-shortened the shot of Rennie looking at the necklace.
-Rennie's "Sean, I love it" is heard over the following shot.
J.J. ROCKS OUT-
-replaced the music while J.J. shoots her video with a better mix of the track.
-cut Wayne saying "Your parents really came through, huh?"
-shortened the shot of Jason's feet as J.J. goes down to the engine room.
IN RENNIE'S ROOM-
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason out the window.
BELOW DECK-
-cut Tamara calling Renne a "Real space cadet."
-cut Tamara plotting against Rennie.
IN THE SAUNA ROOM-
-cut a few frames to remove the fake torso catching fire during the steam room kill.
RENNIE GOES OVERBOARD-
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason underwater.
-cut Rennie & Mrs. VanDeusen's talk about not being able to swim.
-cut Charles showing up & yelling at everybody.
-cut the Deckhand doing the Crazy Ralph routine, again.
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason in the bathroom mirror.
FRAMING THE PRINCIPAL-
-cut the POV of Wayne walking down the hallway; He's already in place filming.
TAMARA'S DEMISE-
-added a bass rumble as Jason stabs Tamara.
AT THE HELM-
-Jason doesn't take the spear off the wall so slowly.
-cut Admiral Robertson's fatherly advice to Chief Carlson.
-added thunder sounds when Jason appears behind Chief Jim.
-augmented the music during the attack on Jim with part of the track Sayonara Tamara.
-augmented Jason's stabs with rhythmic bass hits.
-added a more realistic thunder sound when Admiral Robertson finds Jim's body.
-added rumble when Jason appears behind Admiral Robertson.
-less slo-mo when Admiral Robertson is killed.
-less slo-mo when Admiral Robertson is dropped.
-added sound effects when the Admiral's body hits the floor.
-added a thunder sound after the Admiral is killed.
-fade-out on the shot of Jason after he drops the Admiral.
RENNE & SEAN SIGNAL THE COAST GUARD-
-cut Sean saying nobody wants him around, or whatever.
-fade-in on the shot of Sean & Renne entering the bridge.
IN THE KITCHEN-
-cut the Deckhand doing the Crazy Ralph thing for the third time.
EVA'S DEMISE-
-added a rumble as Eva finds Tamara's body.
-cut Eva running up stairs.
-music can be heard before Eva opens the danehall doors.
-increased the volume of the music when Eva enters the dancehall.
-improved the EQ of the music in the dancehall.
-Eva doesn't look around the dancehall as long.
-added a neck-break sound effect.
-added an additional sound effect when Eva hit's the ground.
PREPARING TO FIGHT BACK-
-shortened the shot of Jules before he grabs the shotgun.
-new sound effect of the shotgun cocking.
WAYNE'S DEMISE-
-shortened the overhead shot of Wayne looking around.
-cut Wayne going around a corner.
-made Wayne's glasses-less POV shots even more unfocused.
-added some low-end to the sound of Wayne's shotgun blast.
-slight speed-up of the through-the-camera shot.
-cut a shot of Wayne looking through the camera.
-merged the two through-the-camera POV shots into one.
-added some low-end to the sound of the explosion.
MILES'S DEMISE-
-cut a shot of Jason watching Miles climb.
-cut a shot of Miles climbing.
-added a rumble when Julius finds Miles' body & gets thrown overboard.
AT THE HELM AGAIN-
-cut Charles mentioning that he's looking for the Deckhand.
-cut Charles mentioning the Deckhand's "Jason" rumor.
IN RENNIE'S ROOM AGAIN-
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason in her room.
-augmented the music during Jason's attack with the track The Ghost People.
-added an additional squish sound as Jason pulls the pen out of his eye.
FIRE ON THE SHIP-
-cut Shawn saying "it's Jason's fault!"
-cut the lightning striking the mast.
-cut the Deckhand saying "Get back."
ESCAPING THE SINKING SHIP-
-the group get into the lifeboat much faster.
-cut the odd daytime-looking shots during the lifeboat row away.
-cut some of the celebrating at the sight of New York City.
WELCOME TO MANHATTAN-
-cut the thugs injecting Rennie with drugs.
-cut the thug saying "Lay back & enjoy it, baby."
-cut the third shot from the thug's gun.
-cut Rennie's druggy POV visuals.
-cut Charles telling Shawn to "shut up about Jason."
-added bass rumble when Julius' head is found & the cop is grabbed.
-cut Rennie hallucinating, seeing young Jason while she's driving the police car.
-the car passes through Jason instead of hitting him.
RENNIE'S FLASHBACK-
-shortened the shot of the burning puddle as Rennie stares into it.
-added a cross-fade from the burning puddle to Rennie's flashback at Crystal Lake.
-added "Friday, August 13th 1976" text to Rennie's flashback.
-cut Charles mentioning Jason drowning & being at the bottom of the lake.
-Charles' "Time for your first swimming lesson" is over a shot of young Rennie.
ON THE SUBWAY TRAIN-
-cut Rennie yelling for "Help" & people looking at her.
TIMES SQUARE-
-added the track Livin' in the City by King Lou as Rennie & Sean look around Times Square.
-changed the music coming from the punk kids boombox. (Bop 'Till You Drop by The Ramones)
-replaced the sound effects during the 'Punk Boombox' scene. (street traffic, footsteps, car horns, people talking)
-cut the punk kids threatening Jason after he kicks their boombox & getting scared when he takes his mask off.
IN THE SEWER-
-cut a POV shot of Rennie & Sean running.
-shortened a shot of Jason walking in pursuit.
-cut a shot of Rennie & Sean running.
-cut a shot of Jason walking.
-cut the sanitation worker saying the sewers flood with toxic waste "every night at midnight."
-cut two shots of Rennie, Sean & the sanitation worker walking.
-speed-up on the silhouette during the sanitation worker's death.
-cut a shot of Jason in slow pursuit of Rennie.
-cut a shot of Jason's face after Rennie throws toxic waste on him.
-cut a goofy shot of Jason stumbling after being splashed by the toxic waste.
-removed the voice of young Jason as the sewer floods.
-extend a shot of the flooding sewer tunnel.
-cut a shot of the silly Jason puppet in the toxic waste.
-removed the sewer catching on fire.
-cut the Statue of Liberty getting struck by lightning.
-removed the shot of young Jason crying in the sewer.
THE END-
-different music during the final scene. ( Sean & Rennie / Safe At Last )
END CREDITS-
-added the title card before the credits roll.
-different selection of songs. (Jason Breaks It Up & The Darkest Side of the Night [raymix] )
POST-CREDITS-
-added a shot of Camp Crystal Lake to post-credits.
-added my production logo to the end.
-added a cue from the track Overlay of Evil. (F1)